Tuesday, 16 June 2015

Give me 10 words.


Our teacher gave us a task of replacing the words walk, eat, look and make so we could make our writing more interesting.


Walk: Pace, step, run, march, stride,

jog, powerwalk, stomp, stroll and tread.


Eat: Munch, chomp, crunch, swallow, chew, devour, ingest, consume, gulp and .

Look: Stare, see, gaze, glare, peer, squint, scan, engaged, sight and glance.

Make: Create, construct, invent, build, design, assemble, form, model, mold and transform.

Sentence

I ran with pace down to the parade to watch my brother in the marching band. On the way I saw some builders creating a scale model design of a house they were going to build. I stayed to glance at the model to scan the detail in the model, I peered around the corner and the parade had started. I stopped at the dairy and came out with some lollies, chips and a drink, I munched the chips devoured the lollies and gulped on the drink.

1 comment:

  1. I like the fact that you made your story very interesting with these words.

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