Thursday, 12 November 2015

Mystery Writing

Mystery Writing

The biggest bank in the world, the Millennium Bank in Paris. Russell McDonald was getting ready for another day at the bank but today was different. He walked in and he screamed, thousands and thousands of dollars had been stolen from the central vault.

“Put your hands up,” said a voice. He turned around and there were three men holding guns and large bags of money. They sprinted out and into the getaway car. Russell immediately rung the police but 10 minutes later the cops still had not arrived but my friends Tom, Francis and Joe had. They said “We heard about the burglary, so sorry” said Joe. “We'll be off” said Francis.

As they walked away I wondered how did they know because I only rung the police. They said they wanted to go on holiday but they had no money to go but I didn’t think too much of it. The police arrived and immediately started finding fingerprints and DNA samples. They got the results of the tests the next day and the prints were from Tom Williamson, Francis Mason and Joe Matson. Who just happen to be all of my friends. They were all caught on the way to the airport. All of the money was returned and the bank was safe.

1 comment:

  1. That's such a great ending and idea of a mystery story to write about.

    I liked the part where you said that the guys friends said a couple of days earlier that they didn't have much money for there holiday which made the story make sense.

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